Will upload a copy of the crit sheet given to me, but for now here's some of the main points that need addressing:
- Wider range of outcomes would have been perhaps more appealing.
- Perhaps try and view the work as more of a journey rather than focusing on outcomes
- Include more information on the clubs themselves
- Work could be more visually exciting/engaging
- Complexity of the design is maybe slightly overpowering.
- Explore a few more different visual outcomes
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