Notes from my crit.
Summarised:
- More clarity. It's not so obvious what directions to take.
- Potentially reverse colours.
- Add some text.
- Put something on the back - to be honest yeah, I did have this idea to e-mail some shop owners and see if they'd like to put a small advert on the back perhaps. Maybe this is a slight cop-out..but then again, I could definitely leave these out in college for the first years, maybe it's not such a silly idea. I'd charge a small fee and that way I could make a bit of money off the back of it. Quite literally. haha. Maybe it'd be something to pursue as a summer project.
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